Feedback for 1st work productions

Trailer 1^st draft – feedback

Positive –

• The symbolisation of the flowers
• Music in the background very affective
• Voice over for the parts of the trailer
• Clear to see what is going on in the trailer
• Shot at train station

Negative –

• Too much like a film, mix the scenes around perhaps or take some out
• Drown out all noise while voice over is on
• Music at start of trailer, should be after the rights screen

Poster 1^st draft – feedback

Positive -

• Immediately catches your eye
• Original, not very common
• Good lighting for the main picture
• Nostalgic and relations
• Good use of colour
• Good information given

Negative -

• Writing at bottom is unreadable unless concentration
• Release date not too clear
• Quote font not too visible

Magazine Cover 1^st draft – feedback

Positive -

• All the writing is easily visible to the audience

• Eye catching
• Incentive into buying the magazine
• Good detail of what is inside
• good masthead name – stays in your head
• audiences know what genre the film is straight away

Negative -

• Movie title fonts are amateurish
• Lighting on the actors
• Missing Date and bar code
• Price not visible
• Font of title to plain