Wednesday, 9 May 2012
Tuesday, 8 May 2012
Todorov Narrative Theory
When making our trailer we tried to
use Todorov narrative theory. This meaning that we must show a state of equilibrium,
then the disruption this state followed by a new equilibrium. However it is
important to keep the audience guessing we won’t show the new equilibrium to a
certain extent that the audience know what is going to happen towards the end
of the film.
Thursday, 3 May 2012
Feedback for 1st work productions
Trailer 1st draft – feedback
Positive –
- The symbolisation of the flowers
- Music in the background very affective
- Voice over for the parts of the trailer
- Clear to see what is going on in the trailer
- Shot at train station
Negative –
- Too
much like a film, mix the scenes around perhaps or take some out
- Drown
out all noise while voice over is on
- Music
at start of trailer, should be after the rights screen
Poster 1st draft – feedback
Positive -
- Immediately catches
your eye
- Original,
not very common
- Good
lighting for the main picture
- Nostalgic
and relations
- Good use of
colour
- Good information
given
Negative -
- Writing at
bottom is unreadable unless concentration
- Release date not
too clear
- Quote font not
too visible
Magazine Cover 1st draft – feedback
Positive -
- All the
writing is easily visible to the audience
- Eye catching
- Incentive into
buying the magazine
- Good detail
of what is inside
- good
masthead name – stays in your head
- audiences
know what genre the film is straight away
Negative -
- Movie title
fonts are amateurish
- Lighting on the
actors
- Missing Date and
bar code
- Price not
visible
- Font of title to
plain
Trailer - 1st draft
below is a link to my first draft teaser trailer
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H4f-9-J1PIc
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H4f-9-J1PIc
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